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I sit,
Sitting on the grassy knoll,
Feeling the breeze bounce on my skin
And fly through my hair.

I see,
Looking over those valleys of life,
Smelling the roses and dandelions
As they pollinate and entwine.

I smell,
The heaven on the earth,
My sense of smell being blown away
By the sense of life.

I feel,
The earths bellow me moving,
The cracks and creeks
As the Earth wakens.

But when I open my eye,
But when I open my eye I see the truth of this world,
The Grass around me stiffens and falls,
The Water boils and the life birthed from it dies,
The Air blackens with the dense smell of death,
The Earth cracks into huge fissures as the planet falls back to sleep.

But I still sit there,
I still sit on that illusion of the senses,
The propaganda of Mother Nature has not flocked my mind,
It has not tricked me at all for all the years I had sat on that hill,
For now I have opened my eyes,
I have now opened my ears,
I have now opened my mind and I know what I see...

For I Was Sleeping Awake.
©2008-2009 ~Saekhor
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Sort of a crappy one to be honest, but then again I don't know..

Tell me what you think and possibly enjoy.
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i like

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although we hunt differently, we are still brethern... your 'family' doesn't know you like i do... (never judge a being by their body)
Force evect virtue {strength with virtue}, Ago torva, run solvo... {Live wild, run free...}
Thanks..

I don't think its that good to be honest but meh...thanks anyway.

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Left Behind A Life Of Shame, Immortal I Was And Immortal I Shall Remain.
It's a bit... complicated? Dunno

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"Decir que los espirítus no existen porque no los ves, es un argumento tan inteligente como decir que las plantas no respiran porque no las ves moverse"

Qué le passa a un alumno de Hogwarts si suspende?? Repite?? Lo meten en Hufflepuff??? (Lara Pérez)
Well..thanks anyway.

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Left Behind A Life Of Shame, Immortal I Was And Immortal I Shall Remain.
Contrast between worlds, dear, always something interesting to write about.. Wonderful poem!

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A rose has thorns that can draw blood, proof that the thirst is a beautiful thing...
:rose:
*smiles*..thank you dear..means alot..

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Left Behind A Life Of Shame, Immortal I Was And Immortal I Shall Remain.
*smiles*.. hehe.. no worries.

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A rose has thorns that can draw blood, proof that the thirst is a beautiful thing...
:rose:
*smiles*

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Left Behind A Life Of Shame, Immortal I Was And Immortal I Shall Remain.
I like it.

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Murder is the ultimate crime of passion.

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